All Comments on 'Ava's Gift'

That's that's just great you teasing then you let him go

she just ruined his life be lucky if a guy that shy didn't kill himself after what she did. wonder if she would feel guilty or just not care if he did kill himself or try to any way.

I'm a U.K. Citizen, where marriage of cousins is legal, and the age of consent is only 16. When I was younger I had the hots for at least two of my first cousins, though I never dated either of them.

Indeed, it is quite commonplace for romantic novels (such as those by Georgette Heyer) to have cousins as the main romantic interest.

So I always have to remind myself that in many US states sex between cousins is regarded as incest!

I hope there will be more to this hot story now that she has him wanting more.

What a bitch, but at least she PUT OUT and DID NOT TEASE.

He will NEVER FORGET his FIRST FUCK...not in a HUNDRED YEARS.

...in which he returns the favor. Seriously. He should go out, get some experience, then push her just as hard as she pushed him, blow her mind, and leave her "desperate and horny". Turnabout is fair play, right? Okay, what I really mean is that -- in this fantasy world; I do NOT believe this in reality -- a woman with a cruel streak like hers totally deserves it. If she'd been nice about it at the end -- they still can't be together, but it was a one-off birthday present because she really likes him -- instead of him being just another bug under her heel, that would be different, but....

I'd be up for a sequel, series, or a lot of others like this if you could fix your contradictions...

No issue with incest, but the lying?! When the story's dialogue claimed she was "naked", I mentally disagreed. The tale later referred to a placement of her panties, which she hadn't removed yet from her body.

I really enjoyed the story until the ending, I didn't like the fact that she was just out for a conquest.

But could have been better. The 'preliminaries' in his bedroom weren't detailed enough. Sex happened much too fast.

Gave it four stars.

little johnny was too fucking stupid to walk around unsupervised.