All Comments on 'Awakening'

by Detachedfrommyself

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MastersWenchMastersWenchabout 8 years ago
Nice!

Great start here! Can't wait for more! xx

gentleone58gentleone58about 8 years ago
Great Start

This was very good and I hope you write more and just what is preacher's wife material? None of us or those that are not preachers or their wives know what they are into.

DetachedfrommyselfDetachedfrommyselfabout 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I was very nervous to submit my first story, and decided that I would submit another if it was well received. Thank you both so much for your encouragement. To answer your question about "preacher wife material" He and I both know that I am not what would be acceptable to be presented as a preachers wife. I do not share the same religious beliefs that he does, while I am religious, he and I are not compatible in that aspect. If I write more, more will be explained in the stories to come. XoXo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Make that another vote for more

I would like to see a continuation of this story. I like the tone of your writing and your characters interest me. Also, I completely understand the preacher wife concept.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love

Your publics says spoken, we want more. I do like the delicate approach you use in the story. I was placed in the care of both Nuns and Priest throughout my high school years. I have been spanked by both and I would love to be "undressed" by your fantasy. Loni

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