All Comments on 'Awakening of Fannie Ch. 17'

by STEVEN VANE

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fine ending for a GREAT series!

Thank you for giving this story proper closure. I do hope that this is not the end for Fannie. I look forward to seeing what direction she will go in the future

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Trully Magnificent

After reading the entire series, this ending was really the cherry in top. Reading about Fannie's experience makes me wish I could go through something as sexually satisfying and gratifying as that. I sure hope this isn't the end for Fannie or others like her. Your writing style, diction, and descriptiveness kept me wet and horny the enitire way. Don't stop here! This. Was. Amazing. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

Very much liked the evolving Fannie. Could have done w/o the ass cleaning and piss. Would like to have seen more gangbangs and w/ greater frequency culminating in a massive bukkake/gokkun, Any chance of a few such additions?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what a series

what a series this has been wish i could find a slut like her to train. yes please carry on with it wold like to see if they get a girl for cindy herself may be or you might think about introducing a family member of fannies for cindy know that would be intresting any one else agree

leakittyleakittyabout 12 years ago
Loved the series!

Your Fannie series is very hot! As I sit here with my nipples clamped I am not sure how many orgasms it has provided me but it made me want to learn to come every hour like Fannie.

Thanks, and please continue to write! I want more!!!

jrunneril06jrunneril06almost 12 years ago
Awesome series

Great job on the Fannie story line. You can't expect all people to like every part, I think it was an awesome piece of writing. Would love it if you continue the story of Fannie's life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE

I have loved your story from start to finish.. I do hope there will be more.

mikep351mikep351over 10 years ago
Great read

Enjoyed the whole series well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good story

the ending could have been a whole lot better than it was considering the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Finally the pathetic opus crapy in piss flat major is finished

Hallllllellluia! & never again. Standing spontaneious convulsing vomiting!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great I wish she were my wife

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