All Comments on 'Babygirl: Origins - The Proposal'

I am very curious as to where you are going. Yes or no situations can yield answers that one and or the one does or does not want.

it should be interesting to see who is the Dom/Domme in this relationship.... who comes out on top, and i look forward to the next chapter of the story... please don't make us wait to long

and she was coming along so nicely. I hope to see this little bit of rebellion alleviated soon, this story was very lovely up to then.

Well what do you expect? The guy goes in with the intent of taking back his collar at the first mess up from the get go. That's not a Master.. that's a pretender. A Master is patient, an educator, in control of himself first and foremost. This guy...not so much. That said, I really did like this story and would love to see more!

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I have to agree with her. It was a first time ever, trial run. He expected her to already sense what he wanted on her first meeting as M/s? That is stupid. You can't do that to someone who has a) already spent the day at work, b) doesn't know the exact rules, c) comes home to a brand new world and the first thing you do is get her horny. I would break it - too much control too fast.