All Comments on 'BabySitter's Discipline'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sorry, ...

... not up to your usual standard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Of course it was up to his usual standards

It was rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story!

I would like to see a part two with more sexual submissiveness and detail

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
yes!

I enjoyed this story, thanks!

magpie45magpie45almost 10 years ago

I liked it can you do a part 2 and make it longer

CollegeKid1992CollegeKid1992almost 10 years ago
It was okay

But it seemed kind of rushed or something. I couldn't really get into it. I liked the plot though, and the characters are very likable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

One of your better efforts

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