by Ashson
One of your better efforts
But it seemed kind of rushed or something. I couldn't really get into it. I liked the plot though, and the characters are very likable.
I liked it can you do a part 2 and make it longer
I enjoyed this story, thanks!
I would like to see a part two with more sexual submissiveness and detail
It was rubbish.
... not up to your usual standard!