All Comments on 'Back from Iraq'

by ohhhdear

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mack_the_knifemack_the_knifealmost 19 years ago
Second person's tough

Writing in the second person is not easy, but you did a very good job of making it feel pretty durn me! Now, if only I could come home to that.

J FaustJ Faustover 18 years ago
V Good

Excellent story - very atmospheric.

SophiaRose7SophiaRose7over 5 years ago
Beautifully Written

Thank you for the great read.

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