All Comments on 'Bad Love, Good Love Ch. 02'

Very nice, enjoyed both stories. Write more please.

Thank you.

It's an exciting story. Hope you continue.

You asked for suggestions to help towards improvement. I believe you have confused two English words, 'through' and 'over'.

E.g.: "He pushed me on to the bed, slowly lifted my right leg and running his hand through [over] it he took off my shoe, and then did the same to my left leg. He unbuttoned my pants and pulled them through [over] my hips throwing them on the floor. He stood there in nothing but his briefs looking at me lying in bed with just my underwear on, so he laid down next to me and running his hands through [over] my back he unclasped my bra and took it off, then he removed my panties and his briefs." I believe using the word "over" would be more correct in each of these three instances.

Thanks for writing a very good story.