All Comments on 'Ballbuster'

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slutty_jannelleslutty_jannelleabout 14 years ago
Very nice story

Very nice story. Excellent beginning for an S & M lifestyle novel?? Some of us might prefer Ellen as becoming more of a true pain-slut, but overall, it's an excellent story. Thank You for sharing it.

humbly,

slutty_jannelle

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good start

A good start, albeit one which in some ways resembles my own experiences. It takes courage to take a strong woman and mould her into the submissive she may want to be, but is afraid to embrace....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Fun

Fun story,thank you

LVGirlLVGirlalmost 9 years ago
Nice

This is a nice take on a familiar theme - The Taming of the Shrew.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I think you can only insult her so many times

Before she just doesn't call him anymore. After she kicks him in his balls.

coigachboycoigachboyover 7 years ago

This story could easily be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I like the story, however, it's quite distracting that it obviously wasn't formatted for this media

WiserbyageWiserbyageover 4 years ago
Loved It!!

Good emotion.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 4 years ago

One of your best stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter one

What a great start to a relationship but only a start where does this story go you need to carry them through the many twist and turns of their life together

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

One of the biggest limp wristed chin lickers that hang out in the Literortica closet we've ever had.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Phenomenally well written . Nicely balanced.

TC Ireland

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