All Comments on 'Ballbuster'

Phenomenally well written . Nicely balanced.

TC Ireland

One of the biggest limp wristed chin lickers that hang out in the Literortica closet we've ever had.

What a great start to a relationship but only a start where does this story go you need to carry them through the many twist and turns of their life together

One of your best stories!

Good emotion.

I like the story, however, it's quite distracting that it obviously wasn't formatted for this media

This story could easily be continued.

Before she just doesn't call him anymore. After she kicks him in his balls.

This is a nice take on a familiar theme - The Taming of the Shrew.

Well done!

Fun story,thank you

A good start, albeit one which in some ways resembles my own experiences. It takes courage to take a strong woman and mould her into the submissive she may want to be, but is afraid to embrace....

Very nice story. Excellent beginning for an S & M lifestyle novel?? Some of us might prefer Ellen as becoming more of a true pain-slut, but overall, it's an excellent story. Thank You for sharing it.

humbly,

slutty_jannelle