All Comments on 'Bar None'

Fantastic dynamic set up here, between the three of them. Hope you continue the story.

Once a month - if we're lucky - a story like this is posted

The writing is first rate, from a technical sense.

The plot is NEW - new, new, new - how seldom that happens

Good story, new plot, it's really first rate work.

Its not like he was after her or she was after him under normal circumstances...

But opportunity knocked and he went in.

Then SURPRISE, she flips the script. I'd love to see what happens next.

A rape story.

I liked it but I wish it would have gone on to tell what happened later on with gabby. Surely they hook up.