All Comments on 'Barbara & Jeremy Ch. 03'

PASTOR SARAH HAS INSTRUCTED HER FRIENDS WELL IN THE WAYS TO HELP A CHURCH GROW AND HOPE THE NEXT INSTAMENTS WILL BE AS GOOD AS THE FIRST 2. THESE STORIES WILL BE A DELIGHT WARM AND WHOLESOME FOR ALL TO READ AND SAVOR.

I love the way the plot develops...and the sex ain't bad either.

Keep writing. I can hardly wait fkor the next chapter.

I think this has the potential to become a nice soft core motion picture. If you get the right people to turn this into a good script and have it revived by a few professionals you may have a good chance of getting this on the movies. If you do I will be one fan watching it and getting many more to watch it. Good luck and thanks for the great story.

Loved the idea of mixing sex and religion. More taboos could be violated. Perhaps masturbation with a crucifix, fucking on top of an alter. Jacking the pastor off on his bible. All sorts of religious icons could be used in turning their church into a sex club.

I believe religion and sex should be mixed. Sex with people that you're not in a relationship with during service, cum and pussy juices are sacraments. Priests and laity care for religious and sexual needs.

Previous comment is written proof that fucking idiots live among us.

But you keep mixing up your he and she as well as his and hers.

Re-read the story a couple of times looking for problems before posting.