All Comments on 'Basic Training Ch. 06'

Loved the story! Was getting extremely excited to read the rest and what Mr. Scott had in store for Blue. However, no more chapters! :(

Definitely looking forwarded to reading more - to a final end.

Please write the end of this!! It's fantastic!

OMG, you have to keep writing....these chapers I have been reading all morning since I stumbled across the first chaper. Please I beg of you, add some more chapters.

post more please!!!

I really liked where you were trying to go through out this series but each chapter is too short, and it would be much better if she fought them at least a little, it was made a bit longer, and added more details and decriptions. I gave them two stars for now. If the next chapter took even part of my advice to be written a bit better I would like to see what happens to her.

I was very engrossed in the ...moment, I felt the anguish.... more.. please

Your first chapter said this would be a long story.... very disappointed 😔