- Loving Wives
- Bat Mitzvah Bash
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All Comments on 'Bat Mitzvah Bash'
by Pholkie Phred
- 17 Comments
gizzmo301over 19 years agoNice well written story but another cheating wife tail with a wimp of a hubby
Anonymousover 19 years agoits time for you to go in and fuck dans wife just tell her what happened ewith them and she will probably give you some also or lol she will raise a sure stink
don87654over 19 years agoIts about time to start working on the Bar Mitzvah or Bat Mitzvah bash of the future, with Dan's wife?
Anonymousover 19 years agoASK WIFE WHY SHE FUCKING ANOTHER MAN DUMBY.
doormouseover 19 years agoI really like your expressive way of writing. You take the reader along with you.
It's a shame he reacted so calmly and nonchalant about his wife fucking another man, but I think you tied it up nicely with the ending.
Great job. ;-)
Crapolaover 19 years agoThe category is ABOUT wives screwing other men WITH their husbands' consent and/or participation. If you can't take it, PICK ANOTHER CATEGORY!
phoenix764over 19 years agoSheesh. A husband sees his wife having sex with another man and does nothing? Get real. Either he should have broken it up, or gotten Dan's wife to see it also. The best would have been both Dan's wife and either the camera man, or borrow a camera from someone - That way he has evidence for the divorce. Lastly, there should have been consequences for both Dan and the cheating wife. Please make it real, otherwise it is just too much.
AnonymousCriticover 19 years agoThat's not a story, it's a vignette. She screwed somebody else, he saw, ho hum. Why did she do it? How long has it been going on? Just Dan? Does Dan do everybody? Why hasn't Dan's wife kept watching when she suspected foul play? Has she seen it and is she going to bust them? Divorce Dan and name whatshername? Then main character in story usually wants something and will do something to get it. This guy doesn't want anything. He saw her and it doesn't affect him. It's not so much that he's a wimp that bothers, it's that there is no story.
Anonymousover 17 years agoEven better if she winds up pregnant, and his secret can be that he knows the kid is not his even though he raises it as his own.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThat's right. I hate them even when some one makes up a story about them. If I had my way all drunks would be vaporized.
Anonymousover 15 years agoit happen to me. I walk away, sad but what to do kick his ass? Beet shit out of him?
After 11 years of marriage i rather pretend not to know ...
