All Comments on 'Battlefield Ch. 02'

I have to say I love the build up of this story and the way you leave me wanting more. I can't wait for another chapter.

I like the way you're going with it. Keep up the good work and let's see another chapter sooner rather than later.

I really like the direction this story is going. It will be interesting what transpires between Dragon and Kitty's "so called".master

I do like the fact that you have brought real factors into the story being that just because someone is a submissive doesn't give the dominate the right to abuse them. I know there submissives out there that think this is acceptable behavior from a dominate but as you know it is most certainly not.

Looking forward to the next chapter already...thank you for sharing this with us.

oh and 5 more stars from me!

i'm intrigued! looking forward to reading more.

Really enjoyed the first two chapters...waiting the next eagerly!

Well written and great characters

5 stars from me as well!!

i really like this story so far. can't wait for more and to what will happen with the master. please hurry chapter 3

I love that you're taking the time to truly develop your characters, their desires and their downfalls. Looking forward to more.

C, I wanted to complement you on your skill at writing a story that holds my attention through multiple chapters.

Long ago and far away, when my wife and I were experimenting and exploring different facets of our sexuality. We visited our local BDSM groups and quickly realized this was not to our personal tastes.

While discussing limits and rules, we were told about a recent occurrence {then}. An in-experienced, wanna-be dom tried to master an young, in-experienced wanna-be submissive. Causing her severe injuries and trauma. The idiot booted her out, ordering her to return in a couple of weeks when she healed up.

In shock, she tried to pretend that she was okay and returned to her job. Her boss noticed her discomfort and saw the wrist markings left by stupid's use of handcuffs. There is a reason police still use metal handcuffs as the markings left are a quick way to tell that someone had been recently arrested.

The girl's boss turned out to be a militant feminist and she dragged the girl to the nearest Women's Clinic. Where the Doctor's quickly determined that the girl was suffering serious internal injuries. The Boss Lady went ballistic and with her political influence, she got the police involved and toot-sweet, stupid was on his way to jail.

Between vindictive Boss Lady and the outraged members of the local BDSM club, who did not appreciate the attentions of the authorities on their activities, the asshole was whipsawed. He had to pay a huge indemnity to the girl. He lost his professional accreditation. Did some jail time and all in all his life was rendered utterly miserable.

As a widower, last year I revived my interest in the local BDSM community. But have lost all enthusiasm {again!} for participating myself after close observation. SSC is suppose to be Safe, Sane, Consensual. I think it should be modified to Safe, SOBER, Consensual.

It was frightening how many practitioners of the lifestyle, Doms and subs alike, abused alcohol and drugs. It was a real turn off to realize that many of the subs are prostitutes, faking it to pay for their drug addiction. And, how many wives had been forced into submitting by abusive husbands or boyfriends.

Evisceration of public medicine and social safety net means there are only budget hobbled, overworked police available. And most of them will not make any extra effort to help those they see only as drug-addicted prostitutes.