All Comments on 'BDSM Training B&B Ch. 02'

Loving this story so much. Cant wait to see what happens next and what the Big Event is. Thank you sharing this with us!!! Five more stars from me.

Harsher than I care for, but what truly sits wrong is that I don't see any training or teaching of the women. It just appears to be trial and punishment, and this with a group of newbies. Not much respect for the trainers or husbands as you have written it. I can't suspend disbelief enough to believe that this far into the deep would be such a positive experience for the wives.

this is a fairly nasty story, not a 'turn on' at all. I suppose there is one consolation,

the slaves are actually allowed to eat, it appears that starving the slave into submission seems to be the 'norm' in a lot of Lit stories.

Unfortunitly this story ends in the middle. When will chapter 3 appear ?

Excellent story! More please.......

please continue the story!

I love it! Keep going..

Why?

It's February 2019, where's the test of the story?!! PLEASE continue!! Loved this!!

This chapter was similar in style to the first but had a rapid decline in quality. It’s not supposed to be about bragging rights of who has the best slave, they were all virtual neophytes. It was desperately lacking in detail. Nobody is going to be proficient in shibari after a couple of hours! To assume otherwise is stupid and dangerous.

Poor Mia I suspect she and her husband would drop kink after crappy treatment like that, I’d demand a refund too. Parts of this came across as abusive maybe that could have been avoided with more details of the contract and of the activities?

Oh my I can’t believe I left something of my list in my last comment (Ch1)- Safewords and why everyone needs them!

Tess (UK)

Makes ME wet. Remember reading this a few years back. Glad it popped up in my searches. Must have smartly bookmarked it. It's a keeper. Don't need to critique or analyze it. It's fantasy. You either get it or don't. Thank you for your writing, MasterTJ.