All Comments on 'Beach Bum Photography'

A good start to a realistic saga.

You started out really well with your story, but you ended it way to fast. There was a lot more that could have been written before you hurried the ending.

I agree with the other post that the end was a bit rushed. I want to know what happens next please.

Story started with promise, rushed ending. I do not see how the title fits the story.