All Comments on 'Beach Party'

it wasnt may fault i just let him

can a complete generation fall, where sex , love, emotions ...have absoultly no value anymore? how hot is that ? why don't you fuck your vacuum cleaner instead.

Nicely done. To hell with the critics.

Thanks.

Very hot.

I thoroughly enjoyed tfe story, but the climax, sorry ending seemed a little abrupt, to me... A minor issue that didn't ruin it for me.

Please keep writing!

~P

What happened between 'i will not be prize' and 'I don't remember agreeing'. sort of a plot skip there. I also found the ending a little sudden.

Told this story so beautifully well done, I'm already looking forward to the next scribing.

Thank you

Hope I also get such a chance with such beautiful girls... I wish....

Did Margaret go home with Brian?

Who cares?

Loved the Extra Part of the Story With Kathy, Especially, Her Scream When She Came At The End!