All Comments on 'Beach Party'

Loved the Extra Part of the Story With Kathy, Especially, Her Scream When She Came At The End!

Who cares?

Did Margaret go home with Brian?

Hope I also get such a chance with such beautiful girls... I wish....

Told this story so beautifully well done, I'm already looking forward to the next scribing.

Thank you

What happened between 'i will not be prize' and 'I don't remember agreeing'. sort of a plot skip there. I also found the ending a little sudden.

I thoroughly enjoyed tfe story, but the climax, sorry ending seemed a little abrupt, to me... A minor issue that didn't ruin it for me.

Please keep writing!

~P

Very hot.

Thanks.

Nicely done. To hell with the critics.

can a complete generation fall, where sex , love, emotions ...have absoultly no value anymore? how hot is that ? why don't you fuck your vacuum cleaner instead.

it wasnt may fault i just let him