All Comments on 'Beautiful Mistake Ch. 01'

by chocostrawberry

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 18 years ago
Great start! Keep more coming!

You're off to a great start---hurry with more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good job

i hope you write more. it's really good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MORE !!!!

MORE PLEASE AND SOON !!!! I LOVE THE START OF THIS STORY .

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MORE!!!

KEEP GOING PLEASE. IT IS A VERY GOOD START.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Start

This looks like a very promising story. Look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good start, but

I want to see how he digs humself out of the grave. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Way to short of a chapter

Can we at least get a complete chapter next time

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Don't leave us hanging, please continue this story.

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