All Comments on 'Beauty & Beast's Lust Ch. 05'

by Honeymuff

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Needs

Needs a bit more.. I found myself skiping lines, and this is not good for a story. Perhaps she has become hard from all that she has read, this happens to some who take up the pen as a living and then their books collect dust. Go back to innocents... best wishes..dan.

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