All Comments on 'Becca & Daniel: Dirty Laundry'

I liked this story, I though you did a good job with the actual sex, it was pretty hot. One thing that I don't get... if Becca was so willing and ready then why did she tell Daniel not to peak when she was getting out of her clothes? That was a bit weird to me, at first she was shy but then all of a sudden she was talking dirty, I think either she shouldn't have been shy at first, or it should have taken her longer to start talking all sluty.

But apart from that I thought it was great! Ava.