All Comments on 'Becca XXX Ch. 01'

Not having read the first series made no difference. Loved this one regardless. It had everything.

Always good to read a 'first time' seduction. You wrote it so well that at times it was hard to tell who was seducing who. Look forward to the rest of the series. 5*

It was good to read about her turning the tables on Aaron!

As I said before your storytelling is great I love your style, yes I know your characters are way out and the situations you put them in are extreme, but you make them believable, the mark of a good writer.

Absolutely spot on...... your character development, and real time story mapping is right on. The sudden realization of the gravity of her newly chosen life is organically moving forward. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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You do so many things well as a writer. The tenderness between Becca and Madison is such a contrast to the violence of Aaron, it really makes Becca feel real. Great work, again.

Getting close to people and then having to lose them is so sad. This is life in general but at an accelerated pace. I hope Bex can take the stress.

Thought it was vaguely familiar, the date stamp on my precious comments was over 3 years ago. She only gets better. 5 stars of course.

Your stories grow in depth as you present them. I'm looking forward to reading more adventures. Easy five stars.

Beautiful between Becca and Maddie. I have a bad feeling there are dark things to come for one of them though. Loving reading your work