All Comments on 'Becky Goes Astray'

by Her4pleasure

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newmantopleasenewmantopleaseover 6 years ago
Great twist

I loved how confident and “secure” the husband felt in his wife and lifestyle until he found out........his wife is getting piped out by his black friend lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Dont care how turned on he would be:

But he should be furious at her betrayal. This might be a mutual fantasy but her actions impacted them as a couple.

Shes not single but she clearly wants to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 *'s

Simply because any loving wife story brings out that one loser with multiple accounts who posts negative comments. Long live slutty wives!!!

Doug689Doug689over 6 years ago
Hot start!

Reminds me of my wife's first BBC! But she also fucked him right after in the car.

I wasn't watching, but got the full details when she got home.

Intense!

Continue the story!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Love the taste of first black cock

What a great rush for your wife. It’s a new game xoxoxoxo Annette

OOAAOOAAover 6 years ago
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!!!! And continue it soon, please ;-)

imatrojanmanimatrojanmanover 6 years ago
Uhhh....no!

Not my thing, good luck with it though!

engywwokengywwokover 6 years ago
Great idea

Great beginning. Don't listen to the trolls. The only thing I can suggest is watch your grammar and spelling. Everything else; the timing and pacing along with the description was great. Thanks for sharing

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 6 years ago
Please use an editor!

I have no problem with the infidelity, the interracial sex, and the story concept. But this is very poor writing. This could have earned a 5-star rating if it had been written well. However, because it had so many mistakes in usage, grammar, and spelling, it dropped to only two stars.

jack2112jack2112over 6 years ago
Good Job!!!

I really liked your story. I hope to be reading more from you soon!

becontree2001ukbecontree2001ukover 6 years ago

is there going to be a part 2?

jack2112jack2112almost 6 years ago
Please Continue

I would love to read more about Becky and Jim, please continue the story!

cindylynn34cindylynn34over 5 years ago

Becky has found the man to keep her satisfied. I would enjoy reading further into this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
where is the sequel?

This definitely deserves a sequel. Waiting for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dave69

Yes please continue. I am interested to see were you take this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We are waiting! Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting story. I've given many bj's in the front seat, a lot of fun. I'll ask my husband if that would gets his rocks off.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Please continue, if you're still out there. My husband never suggested adding a man to join us in bed, but yes for a woman, figures. Now I certainly had given some thought to being with a black guy and one Saturday afternoon, I bumped into a black colleague, had a few drinks and ended up naked in his bed. Imagine that.

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