All Comments on 'Becoming a BBW Ch. 02'

You've got my attention now and I hope you're working hard on Chapter 03. Excellent character development and I'm looking forward to seeing how Celia resolves the personal and professional conflicts in her life. Please don't leave me hanging too long.

Dave

And I have to say, I can't wait for more!!! Your a fantastic writer, you keep me interested and I really feel for "shauna" and Celia. I do hope she gets to have a happy ending with David,,,,but I guess we will have to wait and see. Happy Writing,,,,,,

Great writing and interesting story. Very believable characterisation.

Unfortunate to see another potentially-good story started and never finished.

This looked to be a clever concept, but the author hasn't continued this story since 2011 and hasn't posted anything since 2015.