All Comments on 'Becoming Her Bitch Ch. 03'

Damn so hot

Simply amazing.

your story was very well thought out.. the description of events was breathe taking...

I really identified with your sissy bitch slut. Their fantasies and fetishes are my own. I love the intensity of sensations, whether slaps, whippings, and nipple play they receive. And the ass-play was such a turn-on. I so love ass-play. Didn't think a 7 in circumference was a big deal, but then I'm a much older bitch. Kept your writing going.

now he's anally incontinent for life. Mmm who wouldn't be turned on by that??

For anyone wanting to read a series of connected sex scenes for the purpose of masturbation this was fine. Perhaps that was your target audience? Anyone wanting to read something erotic or wanting to read a story would be disappointed.

The actual writing isn’t bad but next time try writing a story and then add the sex. Sex scenes are best if you make the reader imagine what’s happening not explaining it to them.

Surely she gets to kill him, to show how much of a true slave he really is?

This is a really good sexy series. I enjoy jerking off to the story,But could not handle that large of a dildo in my asshole..