All Comments on 'Becoming Joey Ch. 05'

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Anonymousover 7 years ago

It's a super story!!! Don't stop!

BrendaNW over 7 years ago

hot story, please continue

very good story... makes me wish that I was Joey.. love to be there in that swing.. oh, and all of those items in their playroom.. feel a shivet..

Anonymousover 7 years ago

This was fantastic, I wish I could dress up like that and take a massive dildo in the ass!

MarcelLove over 7 years ago

great story

huebie23 over 1 year ago

started out great.. The love, bonding, and accepting all great, but then the humiliating and abusing.. sent the lovely story to a dark side and turned everything completely different... 1 star for hate it!!!

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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