by I_Shadow
One of the best stories I have read on Literotica. You should be publishing material like that. On reading, it was as if I was in the room, experiencing the same pleasures as he.
Sensual, gorgeous... you took the time to establish characters and a world. If only everyone took as much time focusing on the story as they did on the sex, this site would be a much better place to play. Speaking of the sex, it worked very well. Maybe because of how well everything else around it was built. You did a fantastic job, and hit quite a few of my kinks (powerful women, a woman in a suit, feet and legs...) so bonus points there. Five star, without a doubt.
I firmly agree with all the other comments, you really have an exceptional gift!! If you were to publish your work I would purchase every book.. I absolutely loved this story,you paced it well, d environment was breathtaking, your characters amazing , your style perfect, I'd definitely add you to my favorites, PLZ MAINTAIN THIS STANDARD THROUGHOUT !
I WAS SO ESTATIC 2 LEAVE MY COMMENT I 4 GOT TO RATE MY PREVIOUS SUBMISSION, SO SORRY ALL THE BEST , KEEP THEM COMING YR NOT ALLOWED 2 GET WRITERS BLOCK ,LOL.
reading this story made me cum so hard. give us more
Superb, simply superb. This was a wonderfully written and deliciously sexy romp that left me cheering. They're soul mates without a doubt and good for them.