All Comments on 'Believing in Fate Ch. 02'

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Dinora3228Dinora3228about 14 years ago
I liked it but ...

It's a cute wee story but grammar and editing errors are very distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please continue your story

Hi. I really loved the first two chapters. I hope you will continue.

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