All Comments on 'Belinda's Tale Ch. 05'

by Alexandra

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I feel rushed

I feel as though you rushed the ending. Her revenge wasn't satisfying. Okay, she fucked him and possibly sent the tape to wifey or maybe bass. How does him fucking someone get him fired and if his wife knew about his affairs why does it matter about the video tape? She was fucking the janitor at work, he was fucking at her place. Does he even know she did it? I enjoyed everything up until this chapter.

chrisukbisharechrisukbishareabout 3 years ago

Love the journey of this whole cycle. Of course I'd like more but I feel erotically satisfied. Thank you

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

I'll give you 5 for craft; however, more and more, the story

wanders from next fuck to next fuck.

So...they're still in Melbourne...

Are all the women there so Ever Ready?

Do any of them travel? :+)))

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