All Comments on 'Berserker Child Ch. 04'

Or her grandfather and Thomas was going to rescue her? It seems like too much to go through in just a few days, but I will keep reading

Wonderful story, but dont rush it.Take your time ,make your scenes longer, spend more time with each of your characters before introducing a new one.Even though you don't have an editor yet,you have a wonderful imagination ,just don't rush it.

Thank you for sharing your story.

Thanks guys! I will take this into consideration. I'm glad your enjoying my story. Chapter 5 is proving to be a bit rough so I'm taking my time. But thank you for taking the time to read my stories. Xoxoxoxo

I hope you get some time to add more to this story I like all four parts. Thank you for writing all four parts and I am looking forward to more soon. Thank you.