by Emeraldfae
I hope you get some time to add more to this story I like all four parts. Thank you for writing all four parts and I am looking forward to more soon. Thank you.
Thanks guys! I will take this into consideration. I'm glad your enjoying my story. Chapter 5 is proving to be a bit rough so I'm taking my time. But thank you for taking the time to read my stories. Xoxoxoxo
Wonderful story, but dont rush it.Take your time ,make your scenes longer, spend more time with each of your characters before introducing a new one.Even though you don't have an editor yet,you have a wonderful imagination ,just don't rush it.
Thank you for sharing your story.
Or her grandfather and Thomas was going to rescue her? It seems like too much to go through in just a few days, but I will keep reading