All Comments on 'Best Friends'

the beginning was okay but as you go on the story, I felt so dirty..The guy was such a jerk!!!How can he treat Cameron that way...

i enjoyed your story but i'm not sure how to feel about the ending though. i kind of wanted him to end up with cameron but then again i know she was to good to end up with him; i mean how can he hurt someone he supposedly cared for, especially that way? also haley was a nice character and all is she delusional or something??? i mean if someone i really loved cheated on me i seriously doubt that i'll be fighting harder for him especially if i know he has a tendency to do it again (maybe thats just me or something?). anywho, overall nicely written story :)

that was one of the best stories i've ever read, i dont usually feel any emotions as i read stories except getting turned on but that was pure bliss. i felt ever happiness and sadness that your characters did and i know that may sound stupid but im a romantic lol, truly amazing, please turn this into a series

wat da fuck??? hefucks his best friend and den fucks her completely (pun intended).. like some of your stuff (Office party/Silver Lining), but cant understand dis one....

gary

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. I like the concept and the story development very much. The ending needs work.

I suspect that "aspiringromantic" is a female. A male, my gender, would never have contacted Cameron again. Cameron got her revenge by dating Billy and getting caught having sex with him. She got her revenge a second time by meeting our hero at his apartment at college, convincing him to have sex with her and then crushing his ego and expectations. That was mean and unnecessary. She could have been much kinder. Would she do it a 3rd time? Would the next revenge taking involve his relationship to Haley? Also, having a platonic relationship with Cameron would be too tempting for our hero who, as drawn by you, does not like to say no. If our hero is how you draw him, he would want to protect his relationship with Haley. That means avoiding Cameron.

I would suggest another chapter. Our hero and Cameron meeting at their 25th high school reunion. He, a widower, she at the end of a failed 3rd marriage and both still hopeless romantics.

Cordially,

cladymoor

the story is built around the emotions of two pretty sexy girls who both love the same boy. the hero of the story is a well endowe person who never failed any girl the climax of the story is ver good in sex , his shortcomong being he cant resist any inviting pussy . so when he is caught having sex with karen , his girlfriend cammie leaves her and as a arevenge gets fucked from his ardent foe under his nose

The ending was so unpredictable, and the story overall was thrilling and very well written. I felt attached to each character. Although I wanted our main character and Cammie to end up together, it was a good idea to throw that plot twist in at the end that you "kind of saw coming but secretly didn't want to happen". Great work, but only one flaw. WHAT THE HELL IS THE MAIN CHARACTER'S NAME????

This was an amazing story from the fantastic hook to the very end. I still feel like Haley is too good for the main character, but everyone loves a happy ending. Hope you never stop writing, you've got a gift

I hated this story. I hate sluts and male sluts (Fuckboys). next time plz make a romantic story where there are no sluts and cheaters.

First you post a story in romance section and then make every character of the story a slut(male and female) . Either stop writing or learn to write a good romantic story. Goddammit........

I loved this story. Loved loved loved. I only came to this site for a quick moment to myself but I couldn't stop reading, and ended up orgasming 7 times yeet

I love the characters, the pace, the descriptions, the scenarios. But my issue lies with Haley. I identify hugely with her as I am currently pretty much just the rebound to a close friend who is still hung up on his ex. We fuck casually, often, and I have deep feelings for him. This is a big moral dilemma bc I'm torn between wanting him any way i am able to have him, even if it only means he's using me, and treating myself with respect. The way Haley acted isnt something to glorify. Her behaviour is horribly selfdeprecating and sad. I understand that many women are in her position, me included, but it never ends well

Another user suggested cammie and the main dude (sorry i have no idea what his name is) should meet again at a reunion. He as a widow (haley would have killed herself i suppose, considering her obsession with him and clear emotional attachment issues) and cammie on her 3rd failed marriage.

Could be veryyyy noice

But again I LOVE the story, i just have an issue with the glorification (or even just presenting his behaviour as acceptable) of him cheating on cammie and using haley like that. Be a fuckboy, be a slut, but dont stoop so low

- sexually satisfied although morally disturbed female

Best Friends is a great Romance story, well written, with good characters, an intelligent plot, and a surprise albeit much too brief ending. The erotic elements of the story are fully justified, and do NOT make this an Erotic Couplings category, because of how that material is handled within the context of the over all story. However, one gets the feeling at the end that the story leaves too many loose ends, which really need to be completed.

I was disappointed the way you took this Best Friends turned lover to make the MC cheate on his best friend. This was supposed to be a romance story instead it was like reading a loving wife story where the spouse cheats and the marriage dissolves. 5 starts for the writing but 2 for the storyline as it is unfinished, too many loose ends when the story stopped.

This a a well-wrtten tale of growing up and taking responsibility. Our central character, whom I think is never named, lives a very shallow life of sexual pleasure and only in the end does he get hurt enough to make the right connections and make good changes to his life. We can only hope they are permanent

I’m so glad Cameron didn’t take him back. He messed up royally and lost a friend.

I felt bad for Haley. I’m glad she got her man at the end, but she’ll always wonder “what if?” every time he sees Cameron.