by Kantarii
Such wonderful character development. You've got me dying to hear the next part!
Story erotic, tension building, and also like the fact it reflects real life, things aren't perfect, there is pain and disappointment, while the flame of desire burns !!
I like how the story is developing. I am looking forward to more.
I really like the second installment. Great story development. You have me anxiously awaiting chapter 3.
Okay, so now you set the hook...knowing full well that we all want to hear more! I'm envisioning those pink pajamas and wondering if you will be wearing them in the morning ;)
This is such a sweet story... friendship, but love and true caring. And, of course,desire. Can't wait to read more! ~cd sara
I was so excited for you then realized it was a dream. Still it is nice to have a best friend and dreams Hugs
Sheer words cannot Express the brilliance of this author.
If you do not read the entirety of the segments you missed out on what is perhaps the most erotic "coming out" admission in a love story.
Your writing keeps improving with every episode. You've come a long way since your first started luvie.
Really like this story. I’m beginning to get involved with the characters even though I know it’s a story.