All Comments on 'Best Laid Plans Ch. 01'

Thought it was a fantastic horny read had my blood boiling my fingers rubbing my smooth shaved pussy

liked the story, continue making the wife a complete sex slave to the guy, doing obscene and humiliating stuff and get marked (piercing/tattoo) as a slave to the guy before her husband finds out and divorces her

....longer than one week if she'd forgotten what her husband smelled like.And when are we gonna get some realistic dialogue like, "These fucking assholes decided we just HAD to finish the Jennings fucking account today so I'm scrambling to cut loose babe....." etc. Who wouldn't at least pretend they were pissed? "Oops! Something came up hon and I just love this place so much but if we rush rush rush....."Pistolpackinpete