All Comments on 'Best Shot Ever'

The story moves through its paces spectacularly. I enjoyed it very much and would hope there is a continuation of Miss Shannon's pursuit and complete capture of julian. Well written and very nice pacing.

Thank you for sharing

Why? Why would he go back? What was in the relationship for him besides abuse, degradation and humiliation? Where was his pride and self respect? Other than a play toy why would she want any type of relationship with such a sniveling whiner? This whole mess made no sense. It certainly was erotic. Lacking clever writing it just wasn't worth the time spent reading it. No stars.

Ignore anoy. I have a feeling if the roles had been reversed and the sub had been a woman he would have been singing your praises as I am. I don't usually read femdom stories on Lit because the authors seem to feel that to show the woman is in charge they have to be abusive and the man a total pussy, however I felt none of that in your story.

He left a virtually-identical comment on my story last year. Bless.

Good luck with the competition.

Hottest story I've ever read on here , wish I was him

Well told. A very special relationship described here. (Pity someone simply had no idea what it was about)

I loved it! And as a submissive I wanted to be him. Well written and you obviously know your subject unlike what the idiot anon said. Good luck with the competition.

Such a piece of sustained erotica, building in intensity and sexual tension, leading to a tasteful (in more ways than one) climax. Wonderful!

Very well done. I sincerely hope you write more of this relationship. Femdom does not need to be psychotic, dehumanizing and ugly. The thrum of their pulses is strong and this is really just a set up. Please let us follow them to greater heights.

Excellent erotic writing! Builds the relationship and sexual tension. Arousing sex scenes! Well done, on all levels!

This one had a lot of twists and turns, but I enjoyed the ride. It was well worth the journey. I gave five stars.