All Comments on 'Bet You My Wife! Ch. 06'

by mista_saxman

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AmberEmmAmberEmmalmost 16 years ago
Good girl use

Well written set. You have a gift for writing.....ever thought about writing for a $ or two? ...if You have not already done so! Great insight into the feeling of the people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
yawn

You must be kidding - too boring to read the whole thing. How could a lawyer so dumb head his own firm? He just cooked up a scam to whore her out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Pretty good

keep em coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Boring and unrealistic.

First of all, why didn't John just hire a lawyer to make it clear that his wife was to only provide LEGAL SERVICES! Last time I checked, prostitution was illegal. So that contract was obviously a scam such as this story, making it blatantly unrealistic. It was really boring. So all I read were the first two chapters and this, the final one. Obviously a waste of time, as there were many grammar and spelling mistake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs John and Amy's revenge to tbis story

Need thier ravage add to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

John was probably into it.

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