All Comments on 'Beth & Ann Teach Thugs A Lesson'

It wasn't a bad story and I've read a few of your other stories and liked them too. You've got some really good plot ideas, but you really should take a little bit more time in writing them. Another good idea is re-reading the story when you're done to see if it sounds right. The best plot in the world doesn't mean much if the point of your story is lost in bad grammer.

Unbelievable dire dross