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by lilguy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Learn grammar

For smeg's sake, your plots are written quite well, but learn proper English and grammar. Or, for that matter, let an editor read it first.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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The spelling and use of words was so bad I couldn't read it.

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