All Comments on 'Beth's Internet Adventure'

I really liked the amount of open communication this couple had between them in their adventures. I think that's what made this story line so believable.

Great Story well done! Wife and I have tried this a few times and it sounds like you have too

Very realistically written! Very hot!! -- WhiteKnightAR

Writer when will you quit ruining her great fucking with the sick bastard of hers watching. He is a real freak and into pathetic male humiliation which ruins your effort with his disgusting self cuckolding.

Damn, the freak takes the mother of his children and pimps her out to other cocks to watch - if that isn't sick what could be worse?

Writer does he excite you? Hard to understand that but if you need that humiliation to get hard writer so be it. Just realize that the sick bastard ruins your story for most of us semi-normals - now the few sick male humiliation freaks love you.

But its a large effort on your part for so few freaks.

Very excellent writing and storyline. Ignore the self-righteous pundits, they have no clue about the excitement and potential of the human mind and body, nor is their attitude open to the possibilities. Please keep up the excellent work, and great stories. You and your wife are so very lucky to have found each other... Thanks again

between 5 star writers and 1 star wanna be cuck writers.

guess as an auto-bio it is good, but don't like auto-bios either.

u r a choco turd eater

1 star

This was extremely well written. Couple of typos but a solid five from me. Looking forward to more.

And never will be ! "1*" !!

Fantastic! A lot better than most of the Real stories that I have read. I like them when they are true. I like that you love and respect your wife and allow her to enjoy a real husband that shows no jealous BS and that she respect you and shows her respect and love for you. 5 stars

Great delivery,

The devil is in the details.

Occasionally a writer will write something that is physically impossible. You alluded to "as best possible" when describing them doing something that might be difficult to do.

Good job.

It’s been years since you added to your stories, but if you felt up to writing again and Beth had more adventures it would be great to read about them. Even if she didn’t it would be great to read some made up adventures. Not over the top sluttiness… that gets old fast and isn’t nearly as sexy as some deem to think, but some occasional indulging in a love for uninhibited sexy fun can make for a great read.