All Comments on 'Better Ch. 02'

absolutely amazing chapter in a truly remarkable story.

so worth the read. can't wait to see where they go from here, and where they end up.

you've put me, the reader, in exactly the same spot as Alex - i want her to get better, but i know it would bring me heartbreak (because i want them to somehow, miraculously, be able to live happily ever after), and yet i persist reading and feel almost guilty about enjoying the process as much as i do...

thank you again for sharing this beautiful, original story. 5/5 stars and please hurry with part 3!

Is the doctor saying "you can be her Dom but not her boyfriend"? :(

Another great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Another great chapter , I love the way he's battling his own emotions too can't wait for the next chapter.

I am going to cry !!!!

You are such a gifted writer, you bring your characters to life.

Your doctor character is right on. The interesting part will be to see Audrey become independent and strong, and IF SHE WANTS then submit. Submit from the strength of knowing she can stand on her own. That would be hot. Good job. Enjoying the journey.

You have created a very interesting moral dilemma as the premise of this story. It reads very much like a good sci-fi novella. It's delightful to find works of such calibre on literotica :)

Mixed feelings. I think Audrey needs to become independent and make her own decision about submission.