by Samuelx
?? looks like most of the potentially fun parts of the story are missing. ... somewhat erratic timeline jumps ... just too short. Who were the blackmail victims? Please give them some personality each. Why did they submit? What were the fun & games SLB enjoyed with them? How come LM went over the edge?
In short: looks more like an enticing sketch than an appealing short story.
My name is also Steve LeBeau and I also work for a Pharmacy Sales Corp. There is nothing better than closing a deal with a client by slapping their fat-ass and fucking them in the ass too. This story brought back some memories. Thanks.
Maybe you can write a story on Big Booty Car Sales Bitches.
I know some guys who have purchased cars from some Big Booty Sales Bitches who will do anything for a sale and they let them fuck their fat asses to sell the car.