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Click hereBut before all that happened, Ivy and I spent one more weekend together, when we managed to go camping. I had told my parents that I was going camping alone, so that I could spend more time exploring the forest and she told her parents that she was visiting a friend who lived somewhere else in the state. The plan worked fine and we spent the better part of three days in that tent near the lake making sweet love to each other. It's funny how life works out the crinkles sometimes isn't it.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 16 years ago<p>I too hope that you continue to write. However, you desperately need to proofread your work before submitting it for publication. The number of typos was very distracting and should have been easily caught.</p>
<p>While I liked the story, that plot device of having the assailants pay huge awards and thus fund the marriage of these lovebirds was fanciful at best. Actually I thought you could have left the ending simple and mentioned those others only in passing. I also had difficulty with the randy nurse who was obviously a throw-away character. That subplot could have been eliminated without harming the basic storyline.</p>
<p>Even so, this story was a fair effort.</p>
AirSearch1over 16 years agoI really hope you continue to write more stories like this one and maybe even continue this story.
