by JWren
Lets just hope this does not go the way of so many stories that are exactly the same
I hope not to disappoint Anonymous, or any readers, when the next section of Jen's journey is posted.
Wow....love it....and am so looking forward to her taking a real 12" thick black python....with cum and all.Beautifully described....very realistic....loved everything 100%....please write chapter 2 asap.....
wife and i loved it, we have done this many times now with dildo and real nigger cock she still goes crazy over bibc just like this girl
big turn on for both of us
Nice story so far, what married couple have not tried dildo's and vibrators these days. Looking forward to next installment.
i wish i was as big as most of the white men i have seen in the locker room but i have a little black dick thats only 7 inches while all the white boys had at least 8 =(
Wow, I love the build up and detail of the story. I love these types of stories. Write, write, write!
Well written and entertaining! Looking forward to the next part.
And don't let the trolls around here bother you!
Wish my hubby would not be intimidated by a bigger dildo. I gave a nice one, about his size or smaller... He likes to watch me deep throat it as he fucks me. Suits me well... But every once in awhile... Mmmmmm.
... important for getting a story across.
You had a good intro, a plausible story line. And, you've introduced your protagonist into the pleasures of being a slut.
(it's the SLUTS that have the most fun!)
Jenny
There's a reason so many people love this story - and a hot female with 34b tits who likes Shiraz ...have we met?
Love it, on to chapter 2 xx
Great story ... I've got a big dildo like this but never got very far with it. Clearly I need to try a lot harder ... and try I will.
The vision of you learning how much you love a big black cock in you is the best. If I was your husband you would get your fill anytime you needed it.
Fantastic story looking forward to more.. Im a white married women of 5 yrs. and 57 yrs old .I’ve cheated on my husband several times with black men . And it is phenomenal. I love a dominant men in the bedroom that isn’t afraid to take what he wants . And black men are very good at it . I love the way they take control of me fucking and using me as their whore . I’ve done some really kinky things with black men I would never do with my husband. Like swallow and fuck and spank my ass which I will not let my husband do. I’ll do anything sexually with black men . I told my boss I wanted to dress as slutty as possible for him one day and let him fuck and use me how ever he want and share me with as many other black men as he want . So sorry honey but my white pussy is black owned
That this is a good story?
Jesus, we're in trouble from line one...
"Before I relate this story..."
Relay. You relay a story. You don't relate. You hope your readers relate to what you've written, dumbbell.
Two, clearly a guy writing pretending to be a woman.
Three, so much focus on the dude and his dick. Someone else commented that this should be in the gay section. They are correct.
Please, writers for this site... take a goddamn writing class online. Learn passable grammar. Spell well. Don't just post your first draft, for fucks sake.
relate
verb
1. make or show a connection between.
2. feel sympathy for or identify with.
"kids related to him because he was so rebellious"
3. give an account of; narrate.
"various versions of the story have been related by the locals"
I'm not sure if it was a way to clarify the size of the dildo but every packaged dildo I've looked at on line or in the store gave the vital dimensions needed to entice the buyer.