by KSBerry
is interest. There no plot, no drama, no compelling issues or events. Just another day at the zoo, watching the animals fuck. This is the current version of kiddie porn we now find in the LW section. Its only interesting if your under 13.
instead of rating and bitching about these stories go suck a cock. Gave this a 5
gave you a 5 to help your score, this is a good LW story
VOTE 1* FOR EVERYTHING RATED BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF!
Go munch a fur burger. Isn't that your specialty? Who the fuck are you to complain about anybody. You're the worst FLAMER on this site. Your five star ratings don't mean a thing. At least the anonymous readers voice a valid opinion, unlike yours based on hatred and bias. Authors would be better off without your comments. You're costing them.
Based on reviews, didn't read the story. No score.
A couple of crazy people. Behaving like lunatics. Poorly conceived. Badly written. Really unlikeable characters. Not worth the time spent to read it. 1 star.
I find it difficult to believe anyone would waste the time to write five chapter of this. Haven't read the others and won't after this mess. Just a not story about stupid people. Don't we meet enough of those without voluntarily reading or writing about them? If there was any hot sex in the story, maybe we read. Since there wasn't even any stroke value, why was this written?
so you must have love the story and are just pissed off because you can't cum any more today from read these stories. I gave it a 5
VOTE 1* FOR EVERYTHING RATED BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF!
To offset that sluts score bonnietaylor2. Fair and balanced scoring isn't it bonnie?
If you don't like my stories, why do you read them? So what if I'm turned on by watching my wife fuck other guys or when she has someone else's dick in her mouth? My relationship is strong and we love one another. Monogamy is boring to us. I sometimes enjoy the variety of other women, she sometimes enjoys different cocks.
Your negativity actually doesn't bother me. These comments amuse me, as does your lack of sexual security. Keep bringing the hate because I'm going to keep writing.
Bonnie, thank you for the support.
At least he has times he spent with his wife to write about. The haters and losers can crawl back in their holes, nothing better to do? You must have a wasted life if this is it. Wives like yours are one in a million. Enjoy!,
And it still sucks... Just like all the rest... neither of them loves, even themselves - they are the only ones who lose
Good story plot lines. They go to Big Easy to have fun and they do. Well written