All Comments on 'Billie and the Bordello'

This story just made me said ;_;

I liked parts very much and parts made me sad. What I'd really like to see from you is more of "Cockatoo".

Like previous anon comment this story saddens me. I'm a big fan of ur work, but in this piece I kept hoping for a better retribution for Billie in the denouement. Looking fwd to future work.

Loved the ups and downs of this story, kept me going from page to page when my intent was a few pages today, more tomorrow, etc... As with the story itself, some of the details give me ups and downs too, like why is it always DD's, when something proportionate would make Billie so much sexier.... guess that's a preference thing. Wouldn't mind seeing atleast and epilogue if not more chapters. Hope we get atleast a little more :)

very good story and a second chapter would be nice to find out how other things turn out

At about 4 or 5 pages you might have something. As it sits it was long winded and boring.

Loved reading every bit of this story. I totally hope you make a sequel. I'd love to read about Billie and Lucy.

Perfect story line. Had to keep reading. Exciting n scary, Billie.

What a well written story , Sexy and gripping , I never saw the doublecross coming at the end . Fabulous read !

Yes, it was several pages too long. I got close to losing interest. But well written and I would like to read a conclusion

This was freaking awesome. I was riveted to the entire story. I loved it.

Oh My Goodness. This was an incredibly suspenseful,,ncredibly well written piece of the most deliciously erotic smut. You are fucking brillint. Deep & unique characters, & an ending that surprised the fuck outta me. 5 most well deserved stars.

I agree with CliterateDyke.

beautifully written. Your stories keep me hard