All Comments on 'Birthday Present'

With such a great buildup, it was a bit disappointing that you did not go into detail regarding just how Sandra lost her virginity. This had been an ongoing theme in the story and then you just glossed over it after the fact - like "Oh well, it happened - the end." Overall, it was a good story, but try to give as much detail and enthusiasm throughout the story as you did the first 3/4s of the story.

TX guy-

I am sorry you were disappointed. But the story was not at all about Sandra losing her virginity. That was just added flavor. The story was about kitten giving her Master something unique for his birthday. Something, it turned out, she wanted as badly as he did.