All Comments on 'Bitchy Boss Becomes Office Bimbo'

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JustbeingRandyJustbeingRandyalmost 7 years ago

Interesting start, can't wait to see where you take the story from here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Bitchy Boss

I like the story so far, please continue. Maybe she becomes a stripper, hooker, nymph, who knows. Thanks

jamesn100jamesn100almost 7 years ago
great start

looking forward to part 2

BCTgirlBCTgirlover 6 years ago
More please!

I love it when these kind of stories see the intelligence affected and have her rail against it inside helplessly. Hoping you go there with it.ღ

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great fantasy

i love it, it is so exciting to imagine myself being turned into a bimbo, not being able to do anything about it but to just submit and secretly loving it all along.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
awesome

i'm pretty good at deep throat but would't it be nice to just have it side in completely nice and easy, with no effort at all. i'm curious about her bronze complexion would that be like a deep suntan or would she now be a sexy black girl. sometimes i fantasize about being turned into a sexy black girl, that would be so exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Office bimbo_mind control

Nice too read a slut managers,gets her com uppance loved the ballsucks and deep throat.love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Confused

If Kevin's magical, why is he fat? Or greasy? And why bother blackmailing her if he can polymorph her into a bimbo? And you can say, "Donald, this is just porn." But if so it's a failure because there's very little fucking in this very brief story.

Possible improvements: add more sex; foreshadow and/or explain Kevin's magical powers; add more sex; include her discomfort at being turned into a bimbo. Also, add more sex.

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 5 years ago
Great Imagination!

Too Short. Loved how the 'boss' is Turned Out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Niece Idea, but too short and too less sex

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