by SuperMegaFoxyAwesome
Interesting start, can't wait to see where you take the story from here.
I like the story so far, please continue. Maybe she becomes a stripper, hooker, nymph, who knows. Thanks
I love it when these kind of stories see the intelligence affected and have her rail against it inside helplessly. Hoping you go there with it.ღ
i love it, it is so exciting to imagine myself being turned into a bimbo, not being able to do anything about it but to just submit and secretly loving it all along.
i'm pretty good at deep throat but would't it be nice to just have it side in completely nice and easy, with no effort at all. i'm curious about her bronze complexion would that be like a deep suntan or would she now be a sexy black girl. sometimes i fantasize about being turned into a sexy black girl, that would be so exciting.
Nice too read a slut managers,gets her com uppance loved the ballsucks and deep throat.love it
If Kevin's magical, why is he fat? Or greasy? And why bother blackmailing her if he can polymorph her into a bimbo? And you can say, "Donald, this is just porn." But if so it's a failure because there's very little fucking in this very brief story.
Possible improvements: add more sex; foreshadow and/or explain Kevin's magical powers; add more sex; include her discomfort at being turned into a bimbo. Also, add more sex.