Bite of the Bimbo Ch. 02

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Jim was caught off guard one evening when he found Officer Anita Byrd naked in his home, and Carol between her legs. She looked up for a moment to greet her husband before getting back to the task at hand.

Jim was surprised that he wasn't jealous; although he'd love to join them, he knew Anita was gay and didn't do men. He busied himself with one of his projects until Carol pulled herself free and gave her husband a proper greeting, the taste of Anita's pussy still on her lips.

She asked if he minded her having Anita over, and was pleased to hear that Jim was fine with it. She smiled, and before returning to her guest, told Jim that she loved him more than ever.

Later that evening before Sarah was due to visit, which was becoming as regular as sunshine in San Diego, Carol told Jim she wanted to talk.

After beating around the bush for a few minutes, Carol confessed that she was starving for more pussy and although willing to do more three ways, she wanted to explore sex with other women. She told Jim that she wanted him to also explore sex with other women, and if any of them were up for it he could bring them home to share with her.

Although shocked at first, Jim took the news well. In fact the next day he began to approach several women that seemed interested in him, and over the next several months Jim and Carol got more sex with as many women as they could imagine, becoming more content in their marriage than ever.

One night when Anita happened to be by, and Jim was busy with another one of his projects, Anita came out, completely naked, and asked if he would like to join them. She even admitted that she'd like it if he was willing to fuck her too.

"I thought you were a lesbian?" Jim said as he looked at her natural beauty.

"I am not sure anymore," Anita said as she wiggled her assets for him. "I think your wife is having an effect on me."

Anita pulled Jim by the hand and he followed her into his bedroom where Carol was preparing a few of their favorite toys.

After several hours of the best sex they'd had in a while, they all laid together cuddling and thinking back on how different their lives had become. Jim said to Carol, "You know I am curious about one thing."

"Only one thing?" Carol asked.

He laughed, "Well one thing about our new life together, that is. How did you know about Sarah and me? It was the very first time, and she was, you know, controlling me. How did you know to come over at that precise time?"

"Oh that?" Carol asked. "I wondered about that myself. I got several pictures texted to me, of you entering Sarah's house with your hand on the ass of a woman I didn't recognize. I knew the house and the address was visible, so I came right over. You know the rest."

"Who sent you the text?" Jim asked.

"I don't know." Carol confessed.

"Oh," said Anita. "That was me."

"What?" both husband and wife said.

"Yeah, you know I am studying to be a detective. Well, some things weren't adding up for me, so I began to keep tabs on Jim and Sarah."

"What things?" Jim asked.

"Like after Sarah made a standing date with me three times a week. Who does that? And when she suddenly stopped showering after her shift, I wanted to see more of her cute muscular body."

"So our entire lives have been changed because you wanted to get into Sarah's pants?" Jim asked, sounding serious, but not regretting a thing.

"No," Anita said. "I wanted to get into Carol's pants. Ever since the first time I saw her drop you off at work a couple of years ago."

"Really?" Carol said. "Looks like you got your wish." She reached over and began to tickle Anita, and Jim quickly joined in.

Anita squealed and wiggled all over the place as the pair attacked her.

"How did you know I was ticklish?" she yelled as she rolled over, trying to protect her sensitive ribs.

"You're not the only one studying to become a detective," Jim said.

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blackknight314blackknight31410 months ago

Good story... Bimbo Virus... ha, ha, ha. I loved it, especially since they all lived happily ever after.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Very good story, sexy vampire-like twist without having to die, lol. Well written and thought out, I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
I have to admit...

Not bad. Thought was put into this and the story flowed very well. No spelling or syntax errors and no plot holes...

Great job

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonover 7 years ago
Compliments to the author on the excellent twist in

this story. I'm not usually a fan of bimbo transformation stories. While the transformation can be fun, once it's over you are left with a bimbo, who is never an interesting character. This story, with it multiple transformations and the return of the character to normal, avoids both problems. Kudos for this unique intelligent approach and to the story as a whole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A good story idea and good writing, as well. My only feedback is that it seems

too 'pat'. I don't want to say contrived, but it's like it all worked out a bit too easily and simply.

For example, Carol was presented as jealous and distrusting of Jim with a female partner, fearful of losing her husband and a bit repressed sexually, ie: bj's on 'special' occasions. Then, in the midst of her worst fear, (finding Jim with his female partner), she makes a complete reversal in attitude, loses her fear(s), gains more interest in sex and then, after an explanation and some sex, totally over compensates and becomes Sarah's ally, and then becomes a full blown swinger.

People just don't change like that in an instant. They can change, and even change as much as Carol did, but it takes time and outside influence. I heard or read somewhere that personality change is similar to how a diamond is created: time and pressure.

Combine Carol's transformation with some of the other 'solutions', and it just feels too 'neat'.

This is the dilemma of the short story, how to make the storyline work while keeping it a short story. Not all story lines work as short stories. They need too much. Some one suggested after Ch 1 this would make a good novella; I think you proved them correct in their assessment.

But, every work is part of the learning process and never a waste of time. Keep at it, you have a fertile imagination and talent worth developing.

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