by DarkBlush
Awww but I want more sex between Hana and Shouichi! Lol so sexyyy
Awesome! Hana shot Martin's ignorant ass with no hesitation. I wish they would've tortured him some.
Why in the world would he show up in a red pimp getup? Martin had a good thing going but he was too much of an idiot.
How awesome is it to confront your abuser, make him bleed, watch his stunned reaction and then put two bullets in his forehead? Fucking awesome!! You did a great job!!! I would love to read more of your work!! FIVE!!
There's one last chapter to Black Flower so no worries.
Martin got his just deserts, what a evil, vile creature he was. Good riddance! ! Hana is the shiznit!
This series swooped me off my feet. Love Hana and her new beau. Can't wait til they knock boots.
Red suit and gold shoes= tacky psychopath. Lol I love your writing style, plot, characterizations, settings, hell everything! Great ending to Martin; Linda is dead and buried and Hana is truly a queen. Bravo!! Excellent read.
I am so sad that it is almost over. Your idea and plot definitely could have been a 10 chapter story. I feel like I'm missing out on some character depth it all happened so fast. But all in all, great story and I hope you write longer ones in the future :)
I wanna be like Hana when I grow up. Lol. Good work, I think the way Hana handled that was absolute perfection! It was so cold, the way its supposed to be can't wait for the last installment.
I really love the story but somethings been off for me and i have been trying to figure out what it is.....its the fact that the main lead female is not fully developed. She responds and does stuff but you don't really know her. Not enough thoughts and motives. I felt like she was a walking zombie (emotionally), lack of depth in the characters. There were instances but not enough in my humble opinion. However the story, plot, flow etc... was really really good.
Kill bill meets.... Jackie brown
I really was more interested in the part of her getting a new family and the training more than the main romance point of the story ( great writing to be able to do that).
Having no family, then having family and going from abuse to love are all very emotional situations that require deeper info. About characters then just knowing their actions.
These are just my opinions, no offense
I really do like the story
Great job